托福寫作怎樣表達更有"高級感"？
來源：互聯網
小編：環球教育整理 489托福寫作的評分標準比較高，在語言上的考察點也是非常多而雜，所以大家對于托福考試在語言上的考察一定要有足夠的重視，尤其是一些常見的錯誤，大家更要注意予以避免。造句要做到準確、多樣以及高分表達。下面小編和大家分享一下托福寫作如何表達才更有高級感？更能獲得考官的青睞？一起來看。
I 準確的句子表達
1. 句型分析
英語的句型包括以下幾種，簡單句、復合句、并列句、并列復合句等。在托福寫作中，一般使用復合句，輔以并列句和并列復合句，當然肯定要有簡單句，做到長短句相結合。下面摘抄幾個句子給大家認識并分析一下復合句和并列復合句。
a. Even though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.
這句話是一個復合句，由even though引導的讓步狀語從句。
b. This challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.
這句話中是一個復合句。with介詞結構中，有一個that引導的同位語從句對result進行解釋說明。
c. I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.
上句話是一個并列復雜句。and 連接了兩個句子，是一個并列句;because引導的原因狀語從句。
d. Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receives low mark.
這句話同樣是并列復雜句。由and連接兩個句子，成為并列句，再一個which引導的定語從句。
2. 有問題的句子的列舉
考生寫的句子容易出現三個問題：一是使用破碎句，二是使用接連句，三是句子連接不正確。
1). 破碎句
所謂破碎句，就是句子不完整，通常是沒有謂語(或者說謂語是動詞的非謂語形式，如分詞)，或者是從句單獨成句。
破碎句：She singing alone. (無謂語，singing是現在分詞)
正確句：She is singing alone.
破碎句：He did not come. Because he was sick. (從句單獨成句)
正確句：He did not come because he was sick.
2).接連句
所謂接連據，就是兩個句子直接連在一起，既未使用連詞，也未使用正確的標點符號。
接連句: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.
正確句一: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
正確句二: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
3).句子連接不正確
所謂句子連接不正確，就是兩個獨立的句子之間以逗號連接，這是不合英語語法的。正確的做法是以連詞、分號、冒號、句號等連接兩個句子。
